From 6cb8c4b48b7fd679f2355b079b2d093f62c32d85 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Antony Dovgal <tony2001@php.net>
Date: Mon, 3 Dec 2007 23:01:45 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] reword a bit

git-svn-id: https://svn.php.net/repository/phpdoc/en/trunk@247564 c90b9560-bf6c-de11-be94-00142212c4b1
---
 reference/rar/reference.xml | 15 ++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/reference/rar/reference.xml b/reference/rar/reference.xml
index c3579fa4df..12cddf1bf0 100644
--- a/reference/rar/reference.xml
+++ b/reference/rar/reference.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.5 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.6 $ -->
 <!-- Purpose: compression -->
 <!-- Membership: pecl, external -->
 
@@ -12,13 +12,14 @@
    <section xml:id="rar.intro">
     &reftitle.intro;
     <para>
-     Rar is a powerful and effective archiver created by Eugene Roshal. 
-     This extension gives you possibility to read Rar archives but
-     doesn't support writing Rar archives, because this is not supported 
-     by UnRar library and is directly prohibited by it's license.
+     RAR is a powerful and effective archiver created by Eugene Roshal. 
+     This extension uses unRAR library which implements read-only support 
+     for Rar archives.
+     Re-creating a RAR/WinRAR archiver using unRAR sources is prohibited 
+     by the unRAR license.
     </para>
     <para>
-     More information about Rar and UnRar can be found at <link
+     More information about RAR and unRAR can be found at <link
      xlink:href="&url.rar;">&url.rar;</link>.
     </para>
    </section>
@@ -33,7 +34,7 @@
    <section xml:id="rar.install">
     &reftitle.install;
     <para>
-     Rar is currently available through PECL
+     Rar extension is currently available through PECL
      <link xlink:href="&url.pecl.package;rar">&url.pecl.package;rar</link>.
     </para>
     <para>