From 5d9eacedabd0e1667d9ef6626b0db00e2e37414e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Philip Olson <philip@php.net>
Date: Wed, 29 Feb 2012 03:00:50 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Minor and partial update (grammar/wording)

git-svn-id: https://svn.php.net/repository/phpdoc/en/trunk@323647 c90b9560-bf6c-de11-be94-00142212c4b1
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 reference/mysqli/quickstart.xml | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/reference/mysqli/quickstart.xml b/reference/mysqli/quickstart.xml
index f07bbf871f..4a53034130 100644
--- a/reference/mysqli/quickstart.xml
+++ b/reference/mysqli/quickstart.xml
@@ -1,30 +1,30 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 <!-- $Revision$ -->
 <chapter xml:id="mysqli.quickstart" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink">
- <title>Quickstart</title>
+ <title>Quick start guide</title>
  <para>
-  This quickstart guide shall help choosing an PHP MYSQL API and help getting
-  familiar with it.
+  This quick start guide will help with choosing and gaining familiarity
+  with the PHP MySQL API.
  </para>
  <para>
-  The quickstart gives an overview on the mysqli extension. Code examples are
-  given for all major aspects of the API. Database concepts are explained
-  to the degree needed for presenting MySQL specifics.
+  This quick start gives an overview on the mysqli extension. Code examples are
+  provided for all major aspects of the API. Database concepts are explained
+  to the degree needed for presenting concepts specific to MySQL.
  </para>
  <para>
-  Familarity with the PHP programming language, the SQL language
-  and basic knowledge of the MySQL server is assumed.
+  Required: A familiarity with the PHP programming language, the SQL language,
+  and basic knowledge of the MySQL server.
  </para>
  <section xml:id="mysqli.quickstart.dual-interface">
   <title>Dual procedural and object-oriented interface</title>
   <para>
    The mysqli extension features a dual interface. It supports the procedural
-   and object-oriented programming paradigma.
+   and object-oriented programming paradigm.
   </para>
   <para>
-   Users stepping up from the old mysql extension may prefer the procedural
-   interface. The procedural interface is similar to that of the mysql
-   extension. In many cases function names differ only by prefix.
+   Users migrating from the old mysql extension may prefer the procedural
+   interface. The procedural interface is similar to that of the old mysql
+   extension. In many cases, the function names differ only by prefix.
    Some mysqli functions take a connection handle as their first argument,
    whereas matching functions in the old mysql interface take
    it as an optional last argument.