diff --git a/features/file-upload.xml b/features/file-upload.xml
index 0256075e0a..1a4ec512dd 100644
--- a/features/file-upload.xml
+++ b/features/file-upload.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.58 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.59 $ -->
  <chapter id="features.file-upload">
   <title>Handling file uploads</title>
 
@@ -297,9 +297,9 @@ if (move_uploaded_file($_FILES['userfile']['tmp_name'], $uploaddir . $_FILES['us
      affects the execution time of the script itself.  Any time spent
      on activity that happens outside the execution of the script
      such as system calls using <function>system</function>, the
-     <function>sleep</function> function, database queries, etc. is
-     not included when determining the maximum time that the script
-     has been running.
+     <function>sleep</function> function, database queries, time taken by
+     the file upload process, etc. is not included when determining the maximum
+     time that the script has been running.
     </simpara>
    </note>    
    <simpara>